Serial Series of Paragraphs Planner 

In this assignment, I analyzed the Serial podcast, which goes through the story of Adnan Syed's conviction for the 1999 murder of Hae Min Lee. The assignment was to create a thesis on whether I believed he was innocent or not, and to explain the evidence for my thesis and break it down into clear points to support each argument. One thing that I've learned from this assignment is that I used the planner properly. I've had trouble in the past with using planners and staying organized, but it helped me stay organized and set up the essay clearly and logically. One of my strengths in this assignment is that I used a lot of quotes, phone records, diary entries, and alibis to make a strong, supportive argument. I keep making clear points and easy to understand. I've noticed some weak spots in my writing, such as repeated sentences and ideas instead of expanding on them further, and the details I may have lacked when I was writing, which made certain arguments less developed.

Moving forward. I want to make my points longer and more detailed, avoid repeating sentences that I already wrote, and I need to make more connections between what I write about.