The Skating Party 

This assignment talks about a story where, at a skating party, Uncle Nathan chose to save Delia instead of his fiancée Eunice when both fell through the ice, and he lived the rest of his life with guilt and regret.

I demonstrated a good comprehension of the story and the characters. Using the story, I implemented quotes and described how they relate to the theme. My responses were reflective and deeper than just surface level.
Some of the sentences were overly long.
I definitely need to practice writing in full paragraph form more. Also, I should maintain my sentences shorter and more to the point. To make my answers more robust, I can delve a bit more into the analysis.