I wrote this report about a team called the Ottawa Falcons, who, in this photo, had captured their first provincial title in over a decade with a 3–2 overtime win against the Kingston Hawks. I infused a lot of energy into my writing and made the game sound as vibrant as it was. I included quotes from players and coaches to legitimize and give a more professional feel to my article. Some sentences are kind of long and overstuffed with information that doesn't truly elaborate, just restate. The stats at the end are good, but I fail to explain them better than just stating them. Word choice needs to vary so I'm not sounding repetitive.