The Curse of Macbeth
This assignment was about how Shakespeare's play Macbeth is believed to be cursed because of its use of real witch spells, and since its first performance, it has been linked to disasters and accidents. I believed I succeeded in clearly showcasing why it's led to believe it's cursed and supporting it with strong details, such as the death of an actress and the ultimate ban by King James. However, some of my sentences were too long and wordy, so I need to improve my sentence structure. I also tended to include unnecessary background information and sometimes repeated similar words instead of varying my word choice. To improve, I will focus on keeping my answers clear and concise, simplifying my sentence structure, and sticking only to what the question is asking.
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